Your purpose became a hostage of the past, the ransom is your future, that if you want your present to last
Your were a caged whisper,
You ended up being the yesterdays but never morrows, the one who built a castle with his own sorrows
You were a cursed bless
Your angel died when you were six, worse is all it gets, you are someone who cannot be fixed
the devil claimed you next, and now you are what you were against
You were a lovely mess
Written by: Marouan Elmail
Photo by: Pixabay
Well written, beautifully said, I love this part “Your purpose became a hostage of the past, the ransom is your future, that if you want your present to last” beyond reason.
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Ayy π thank you so much dear, means a lot
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Cursed bless, use of oxymoron. Beautifully done. Just loved itβ€
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I’m so glad you did β₯ thaank youu π
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The language is so rich, especially loved the oxymoron “cursed bless” ,the emotions so intense. I couldnt help but love ‘Caged Whisper’ π
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Thank you so much for your words ira ππ it means a lot :’)
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Very well written, rich words – they touch soul deep with its pain
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Thank you β₯ I’m humbled
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Touching and beautiful poem.
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Thank you π I’m flattered
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Wow
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